2020英语公开课学案：Continuation Writing “A Narrow Escape”

Learning Guide: A Narrow Escape

Class:___________  No.________ Name:____________________

I . 2017年6月浙江省高考读后续写                                                                                     

1    On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.

2    Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.

3    Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase.

4    Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.

5    At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.

 

注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

 

Paragraph 1:

The car abruptly stopped in  front of him. _______________________________________

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Paragraph 2:

A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. ________________________________

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II. Read

1)      Para 3: bear spray:___________________

             envelop  (v).:___________________  

envelope   (n):___________________

Para 4: a steep uphill climb:______________________

                    Once he hit the hill.:______________________________

        Para 5: He pulled in front of the car. ___________________________________

2)  Look at pictures and retell the story.

                                              

Who: ____________________________    What: ____________________________

When:___________________________     Why: ____________________________

Where:___________________________    How: …

3) Sort out the plot and Mac’s emotion development.

 

III. Plot

Paragraph 1:

The car abruptly stopped in front of him. _______________________________________

Q1:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q2:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q3:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q4:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q5:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Paragraph 2:

A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. ________________________________

Q1:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q2:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q3:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q4:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

Q5:___________________________________  Answer:_____________________________

IV. Write

1. Criteria:

1) coherence: plot & language style   2) content  3) grammar & vocabulary   4) linking words

2.翻译：这匹狼离开了，消失在树林里。(go away, disappear)

1）用非谓语________________________________________________________________

2）用倒装__________________________________________________________________

3）用并列句________________________________________________________________

3. Expressions of fear

scared, frightened,  in panic, be full of fear, be filled with terror, shake all over, sick with fear, nearly die with fear

    On seeing the fierce wolf, Mac’s _______ stood on end. With his _______ sweating, he could hardly hold the handles. As the wolf almost pressed its nose against him, Mac’s ______ tightened and his_______ felt weak.

V. Homework

Write and polish your writing.